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I strecth my muscles, loosing then for the act i am about to perform.

I gaze at the open feild before me, my runway.

I take my starting stance, my leg muscles tense, prepared for the running sprint needed to left my small body away from the ground.

I hold my wings tight to my body so as i do not take off to early.

I sprint forward, throwing my small wing out to its full span, cacthing an updraft and pumps my wings hard to take off.

I angle myself upward my head in peace, reeling from the adrnileane and and rush of taking off and pump my wings harder.

I level off and cacth the tip of my wing on and air current and glide softly.

I tilt out and pump my wings so i stay aloft.

I spot a clearing a head of me.

I pull my  wings in close and angle my self downward, throwing my self into a steep dive.

I throw my wings out holding the muscles tight as they are pulled back and i come to a safe and soft landing.

I breathe heavily, my heart racing.

I am at peace.

I am at home.

I am free.
©2008-2009 ~AsheKimiko
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o wrote this at band before a parent meeting and i really like it. in it i am a sparrow taking off into flight and am flying and landing (duh) but please tell me what you think
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omg this is really good!!!!!! great job! :3

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"You drive on it..." "DRIVEWAY!" "It has rocks..." "....CRAPPY DRIVEWAY!" (Victoria and me whilst playing Catchphrase. lol i'm a dumbass)

"I don't want to do it anymore" "Why?" "CUZ IT'S SCARY" (Run Fatboy Run)
thanx!!!! i wrote it in an hour and i re read it when i was done and i was like damn thats good

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<3cara<3
LOL being bored has its ups. hehe

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"You drive on it..." "DRIVEWAY!" "It has rocks..." "....CRAPPY DRIVEWAY!" (Victoria and me whilst playing Catchphrase. lol i'm a dumbass)

"I don't want to do it anymore" "Why?" "CUZ IT'S SCARY" (Run Fatboy Run)
i luv it!! thats exactly how i usually feel...minus the wings...lol... :iconfurryglompplz:

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Don't judge me for being different... judge me for hating robots like you who just want to "fit in" and be "popular."

:heart:---NJ---:heart:
yes it does

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<3cara<3
lolz yea i kno

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<3cara<3
i gots a proposition.... can i edit your writings .3. you know... grammer and all that jazz? Its okay if you don't want it though ^^;
yea of course always

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<3cara<3
that's so cool! it kinda reminded of a small dragon takeing off for some reason o3o

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